Five-liner (Virksomhedsstart): Forskelle mellem versioner

Versionen fra 3. okt. 2008, 13:31

Five-liner er obligatorisk og skal afleveres til johe@ipl.dtu.dk senest d. 10. oktober 2008.

Background
- A parking disc that is automatically and electronically set to the current time, when the car is parked.
Pain
- Many parking lots allow you to park your car for a limited amount of time. To indicate when you got there, the parking disc must be set. This is easily forgotten, and will often result in a parking ticket.
Value proposition
- You will always be sure that the parking disc is set to the correct time, when the car is parked.
Jury
- Drivers in general, car manufacturers, car dealers

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 * Background
-** A ''parking disc'' that automatically sets it self to the current time, when the car is parked.
+** A ''parking disc'' that is automatically and electronically set to the current time, when the car is parked.
 * Pain
-** Many parking lots allows you to park for several hours. To indicate when you got there, the parking disc must be set. This is easy to forget, and will often result in a ticket.
+** Many parking lots allow you to park your car for a limited amount of time. To indicate when you got there, the parking disc must be set. This is easily forgotten, and will often result in a parking ticket.
 * Value proposition
 ** You will always be sure that the parking disc is set to the correct time, when the car is parked.
 * Jury
-** Drivers in general, ...
+** Drivers in general, car manufacturers, car dealers